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Apr 13, 2009 21:15:07 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Apr 13, 2009 21:15:07 GMT -5
<3
i'm seriously impressed by the goat though f'real
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Apr 14, 2009 13:30:07 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Apr 14, 2009 13:30:07 GMT -5
he, she, it it's a difficult thing he spins and spins and he always wins and it doesn't matter what you say to him
do you want to matter?
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Apr 14, 2009 14:38:53 GMT -5
Post by PurpleGrape on Apr 14, 2009 14:38:53 GMT -5
pretty. <3
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Apr 14, 2009 16:37:50 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Apr 14, 2009 16:37:50 GMT -5
thanks : D
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Apr 21, 2009 9:51:12 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Apr 21, 2009 9:51:12 GMT -5
we could write the future in stone but could you wonder? when that stone crumbles away could you even wonder?
i'm here now and i'm not going away do you need to wonder?
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Apr 21, 2009 10:37:29 GMT -5
Post by Barn Owl on Apr 21, 2009 10:37:29 GMT -5
Woah, that's awesome...
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Apr 21, 2009 10:41:12 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Apr 21, 2009 10:41:12 GMT -5
thanks ^^
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Nov 1, 2009 0:39:31 GMT -5
Post by Nephyr Pariah on Nov 1, 2009 0:39:31 GMT -5
Seven and three The numbers of me Two and four The difference, they are I guess I'm odd Yes, perhaps I'm odd Or perhaps they just think that of me Because They're even I'm unstable Rocking back and forth There is no choice here It's all the same I see you're from another place I see you can't see me I see you can't be free I see I can't be me The locks The chains The prisons You've made me your own victim This place has walls of solid thickness See-through building So they can point and stare And laugh
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Nov 1, 2009 16:27:08 GMT -5
Post by Barn Owl on Nov 1, 2009 16:27:08 GMT -5
That's wicked good!! <3 I wish I could write poetry... and give better feedback than this haha
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Nov 1, 2009 18:18:26 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Nov 1, 2009 18:18:26 GMT -5
i bet you can, owl. did you ever try to write spontaneously without thinking?
i like your imagery, sahrah. it's very interesting. kind of surreal *hmm*
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Nov 4, 2009 0:35:38 GMT -5
Post by Nephyr Pariah on Nov 4, 2009 0:35:38 GMT -5
Yay! Thankies. ^_^ That's wicked good!! <3 I wish I could write poetry... and give better feedback than this haha Thankies. ^_^ I'll bet you can write poetry. Just say what's in your mind.
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Nov 28, 2009 1:55:22 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Nov 28, 2009 1:55:22 GMT -5
OK
sometimes i feel like something went wrong that i should be that young and that strong that i should be shaped ... just like everyone else? is that what you want? what you want for yourself? i think not i hope not but sometimes it hurts that it can't just be easy... or else, not hard like this
fingers of worry they race up and down inside and outside a tear and a frown what is there to betray!? it's you! you are me what's the harm in hurting you when i'm only hurting me? but you're beautiful i am i said that i love you just how you are (me) you said that you love me just how i am (you) and i do yes i do yes we do but it isn't easy and sometimes the loneliness stings
wipe a tear from your eye and you cry fall into my arms into me into you fall what is there left to do? is anyone interested in seeing all that i need? in seeing inside to the hurt that is me? (you) can anyone stay long enough to know? is it awkward to stay (is it awkward to go?) in real life it's much more violent and the tears they hang there silent in real life there's more to be had than simply the good and the bad and i'm so used to not being understood lot in life lot in life lot in life and they disappear without a trace one day they're there and then they're just a face just some thing you see online forgetting you eaten by time and you forget what's all this really? are you lonely? do you need a man? or did you just realize that they're going away and there's really nothing you can ... do you can't hold on so cry and let go there's no hurry now it's fast then it's slow it's ok baby it's ok to go slow it's ok that you're afraid of them seeing you it's ok that the shadows are really the town and the monsters are people the fangs are a frown it's ok that you're strange i like you like that it's ok that you're me it's ok to fall flat it's ok that you shiver to me in the bed far under the blankets having hidden your head it's ok that you're not visible to the 'them' it's ok that we're gone it's ok (amen)
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Nov 29, 2009 14:06:34 GMT -5
Post by Barn Owl on Nov 29, 2009 14:06:34 GMT -5
Jude I love reading your poems!! They're always so different...
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Nov 29, 2009 16:31:05 GMT -5
Post by Jude on Nov 29, 2009 16:31:05 GMT -5
thank you : D that really is a huge compliment for me
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Feb 11, 2010 10:49:10 GMT -5
Post by PurpleGrape on Feb 11, 2010 10:49:10 GMT -5
Been a good while since I've written something:
And so there we stood. Hands so far apart and yet they claspedfitted like perfect puzzle pieces. There we were on the cliff about to jump as the wind whipped out our hair and our day and night locks wrote stories of longing in the air. Another step closer and there we stood. Ready to shove each other over the edge and watch the crash be fore we joined. Bodies already mangled by the past, the jagged rocks could do us no harm. And yet we feared them. So there we stood, watching time pass the soft ticking of the seconds keeping us awake at night, ravaging our thoughts by day. Tick Tick Tick I love you Tick Tick Tick I love you Tick Tick Tick Words so loud Muffled by fear. So there we stood, waiting to leap.
It doesn't have a title yet and I don't think I'm 100% happy with it, but there it is :]
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